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Re: Comments on Stories
« Reply #1155 on: 07/11/17, 09:50:42 AM »
@Darth_Fulcros   But what happened neeeeeext?
All that is gold does not glitter, not all those who wander are lost.
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Re: Comments on Stories
« Reply #1156 on: 07/12/17, 03:14:03 AM »
@Darth_Fulcros   But what happened neeeeeext?

Stay tuned. :shifty:

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Re: Comments on Stories
« Reply #1157 on: 07/15/17, 08:11:41 PM »
Regarding @Mei and "Hunting the Hunted"...my heart is seriously breaking for Ke right now...but also to @Kremon, @Noth and @Karmic - I love the way the four of you write together :)
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« Reply #1158 on: 07/16/17, 01:06:13 PM »
Regarding @Mei and "Hunting the Hunted"...my heart is seriously breaking for Ke right now...but also to @Kremon, @Noth and @Karmic - I love the way the four of you write together :)

I am so glad to hear that you are enjoying this, and that Ke has warmed to at least one person LOL As always, I appreciate your comments on the story we are developing. :grin:
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Re: Comments on Stories
« Reply #1159 on: 07/16/17, 01:34:41 PM »
Aww <3; I've done more of Karmic's part in the event in "live in game RP" discussions, but as this progresses I might get some more posts in the thread lol.

If you're really bent on reading everyone's stuff  :grin: about characters still around in game - my profile has the link to my "ongoing" character thread as I tend to keep all of "only karmic related" stuff in one thread and so it only gets to the front page when I actually post something directly to it lol.

But only if you're looking for more reading material =D.


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« Reply #1160 on: 08/12/17, 10:12:14 AM »
@Kremon

Beautifully written.

Spoiler tag for those who haven't read it yet.

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I didn't think I'd cry for Exephos when his end finally came... but I did.

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« Reply #1161 on: 08/13/17, 01:52:25 PM »
@Kremon - Very nice close out to Exephos's story.

I was wondering, since I wasn't sure from the story - Was Exephos attacked at first on Custodum grounds? Would the Custodum then have uncovered evidence/footage of what transpired on their own grounds?
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« Reply #1162 on: 08/13/17, 09:15:21 PM »
@Kremon, you've always taken Exephos to extremely interesting places as a character, representing a lot of nuance and realism and brokenness that most people aren't willing to entertain with their characters and their arcs, and you stayed true to that approach till the last moment.

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I realize that you had Exephos overtly nod to your other characters (like Rell) carrying forward your RP legacy, but I think Exephos's absence is definitely going to be something that is felt, which is a great testament to what you've tried to bring to community storylines through him. I thought it was symbolically appropriate that he goes out in one of the spots of his greatest shame. Kudos to you for pulling few punches with your arc, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with your stable of characters coming onto the scene, and particularly with Rell, who I imagine is going to carry the Exephos stamp on him in the most significant ways.
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« Reply #1163 on: 08/14/17, 05:48:10 AM »

I'm glad you all enjoyed the final chapter to Exephos's story, it was definitely a hard one to decide on and figure out how to best write it, but I'm looking forwards to the opportunities it opens. Also, Noth, I should mention that it is on Custodum grounds and that the details of the attack could definitely found out through the recordings.

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But now with Exephos's death and the killing of the last of the cabal's most loyal, it ties up his entire storyline, save for one or two loose ends. I'm not sure how to proceed from here, but I've got a few ideas.
Exephos; a haunted war-ravaged veteran.
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Re: Comments on Stories
« Reply #1164 on: 08/15/17, 03:57:41 PM »
@Mei your latest installment has the richest portrayal of the more remote parts of Hutta, I adore it

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« Reply #1165 on: 08/15/17, 05:00:16 PM »
@Mei your latest installment has the richest portrayal of the more remote parts of Hutta, I adore it

Thanks Elym!! Was transcribed from actual on the ground RP/co-written with @Oathbreaker :music: Glad you enjoyed it!!
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« Reply #1166 on: 08/28/17, 11:03:25 AM »
Hey @Orell! Really enjoyed the last installment of Anakithane's adventures. I thought having her speaking aloud for log purposes was an excellent literary trick--and very interesting to read! I look forward to seeing where this goes. :D
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« Reply #1167 on: 09/24/17, 05:53:48 AM »
@Seraphie - such a beautifully touching installment to your story :) You made my morning coffee time very happy!
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« Reply #1168 on: 09/26/17, 12:35:02 AM »
@Noth somewhere, out there, in the great galaxy, perhaps even at some board meeting, Hark is in furious fits of laughter. The loving kind, I promise.

No really, I promise.

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Turari (29, Major, jr. grade CEDF)     Silivia Fenir (21, Freighter Captain)
Lashila Sellara (25, Grey Sith)         Harkasone Milan (29, Philanthropist)
Reill Farr(31, Silent Mandalorian)     Mystenin Felsa (26, 'Green' Jedi)
Touko Saizar(19, Turari's underling) Temple Guard #124(35, Pro Spook)
                                                    Philla Kasan (29, Captain, 51st Recon)

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« Reply #1169 on: 09/26/17, 01:51:59 AM »
@Noth somewhere, out there, in the great galaxy, perhaps even at some board meeting, Hark is in furious fits of laughter. The loving kind, I promise.

No really, I promise.

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LOL, why laughter? Amused at his friend's thick-headedness?
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