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Author Topic: Comments on Stories  (Read 82582 times)

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Offline Jovia

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Comments on Stories
« on: 06/16/12, 12:02:55 PM »
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This is the thread in which you can post comments and appreciation for the stories contained within this subforum.

If you liked someone's story, let them know! :) This way we can keep the backstory threads clean for easy reading, AND compliment other writers for their stellar work.

Comment away :)
The Communist Domino >.>

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« Reply #1 on: 06/16/12, 12:13:23 PM »
Iaera, I just read through what you've posted so far - it reads very much as what I'd expect from a first person Jedi perspective. :)

Your action sequences/saber battles are well described, and while I don't have a clue about Jedi stances ^^, I was able to gather enough from your descriptions of them to understand what they meant.

I look forward to meeting you IC.  ;)
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« Reply #2 on: 06/16/12, 02:08:11 PM »
Bump, because we don't need my story spam clogging up this forum ^^

I just read your thread too, Cali. I'm being productive today :p

Very gritty! Goes a long way to explaining why she is as she is IC.
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« Reply #3 on: 06/16/12, 04:28:29 PM »
I'm glad you like it Jovia :)

And thank you soooo much for bringing your stories over!  I'm sure the new Server will love them as much as we do!

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« Reply #4 on: 06/17/12, 02:12:02 PM »
Sciran! We need a sticky on this thread so it doesn't get lost!

And bumping both to keep this thread from getting lost in my deluge of fiction and to give mad props to all of our excellent writers who are bold enough to string words into sentences and paragraphs for our reading pleasure. Each and every one of you rock!
Saura Colton - Former Republic slicer/spy
Jace Colton - Captain of the Second Star (retired)
Drexa Nahir - Akar Enclave Master (deceased)

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Re: Comments on Stories
« Reply #5 on: 06/17/12, 02:58:41 PM »
Sticky requested, sticky granted.

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« Reply #6 on: 06/26/12, 11:05:45 AM »
A Lesson on Ignorance, by ShantiilOrell

Nice job on depicting the atmosphere in the cantina though this conversation fragment/story and an interesting lesson on the Jedi code.   Thanks for sharing.

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« Reply #7 on: 07/02/12, 05:57:47 PM »
Garryson - I am enjoying your story so far. Looking forward to reading more!
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Remira - Republic Pilot
Mae'lorai - Jedi Sage
Aldrea - Jedi Padawan
Melaena - Imperial Force-user
Xanae - Sith Assassin

Offline Calibis

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« Reply #8 on: 07/04/12, 10:43:21 AM »
Shantiil, I really enjoyed reading Betrayal.  It's rare to find such an emotional and driving backstory to a Sith PC, and honestly as I read through it I agreed, She will make a great Sith. 

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« Reply #9 on: 07/14/12, 10:55:26 AM »
No, Thavash!

Come back to the Republic!

I will miss your questions too much!

I enjoyed reading your post, Zullia. It made me smile. But it also made me sad. :(

Grrr.
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« Reply #10 on: 07/14/12, 12:23:29 PM »
No, Thavash!

Come back to the Republic!

I will miss your questions too much!

I enjoyed reading your post, Zullia. It made me smile. But it also made me sad. :(

Grrr.
Thanks! Yeah, Thavash can make you smile but sad at the same time. But if someone helps her, she might come back >.>

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« Reply #11 on: 07/22/12, 08:52:19 AM »
Jovia, The Line.  I'm looking forward to seeing how that winds up.  At least you left it open for Alma to return . . .

I love your writing!

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« Reply #12 on: 07/22/12, 09:08:37 AM »
Alma would have a ...hard time returning from what happened. But at least it was well written : )

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« Reply #13 on: 07/22/12, 11:32:39 AM »
Alma would have a ...hard time returning from what happened. But at least it was well written : )

She could be a severed head with a spine, like that episode of Futurama!



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« Reply #14 on: 07/23/12, 01:32:23 PM »
KRIFF! Jaade.... I need better security around our Kwenn office clearly.

Time to install stealth scanners around the building.

(awesome posts!)
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